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Concepts, Models, and Experiments


Paul Schacht

1 Leave a comment on paragraph 1 0 State University of New York at Geneseo | http://www.geneseo.edu/english/schacht

2 Leave a comment on paragraph 2 0 Please visit the final version of Digital Pedagogy in the Humanities, where you can read the revised keywords and create your own collections of artifacts.

3 Leave a comment on paragraph 3 0 The official reviewing period for this project has ended, and commenting is closed.


4 Leave a comment on paragraph 4 0 "I contend, quite bluntly, that marking up a book is not an act of mutilation but of love." So wrote the philosopher Mortimer J. Adler in 1941, describing an amatory practice that scholars, students, and other serious readers have pursued with gusto for millennia. But continuing that practice with digital text has not always been easy. Although Mosaic, the first graphical Web browser, was intended to permit annotation, good tools for marking up what you read – or hear, or view – online have been slow to develop.

5 Leave a comment on paragraph 5 0 Fortunately, they’re now available in abundance. And as they enable multitudes of readers to share their "acts of love" instantly across space and time, connecting not only with texts but with one another inside texts, they’re facilitating a kind of textual intimacy that traditional books don’t provide.

6 Leave a comment on paragraph 6 1 Two words frequently used to describe online annotation tools underscore what’s new: "social" and "open." Thanks to a platform named SocialBook, Stephen Duncombe’s annotatable edition of Thomas More’s Utopia is "open to criticism, open to participation, and open to re-creation" by its readers, offering a kind of intimacy at scale. SocialBook’s CEO, Bob Stein, is founder and co-director of the Institute for the Future of the Book, the birthplace of MediaCommons, a digital scholarly network where in 2009 Kathleen Fitzpatrick made her manuscript Planned Obsolescence available for "open peer review" using CommentPress, an annotation plugin to the open-source blogging platform WordPress.

7 Leave a comment on paragraph 7 0 The participatory ethos of social annotation aligns it with the promise of radical democracy: free expression, common ownership, mutual commitment; liberty, equality, fraternity. The promise stands in marked opposition to those aspects of higher education pedagogy and scholarship that remain, even in democratic societies, hierarchical, exclusive, proprietary, and competitive.

8 Leave a comment on paragraph 8 0 First and foremost, then, collaborative annotation platforms offer teachers a tool for democratic practice. When teaching literature, such practice might involve encouraging students to "talk back" to a canonical author in the margins of the author’s work, or inviting them to engage in conversation there as equals with their professor and classmates. When teaching writing, it might entail inviting students to engage in peer review of one another’s drafts or finished essays. Both kinds of assignment build community, empower students to speak, and underscore the inherently collective nature of creativity and interpretation.

9 Leave a comment on paragraph 9 0 These platforms also provide an opportunity to highlight what democratic deliberation shares with academic discourse: the general form of conversation. As Gerald Graff and Cathy Birkenstein argue in their influential writing handbook "They Say"/"I Say": The Moves that Matter in Academic Writing, writing-as-conversation, both within and outside academia, typically begins by gesturing toward an actual or hypothetical position taken by another, then responds in ways that follow a limited menu of general patterns, each of which allows for considerable variation. The margins of a text can serve as a space for noticing and practicing the moves that matter in written discourse at a faster pace than is possible at the level of the essay.

10 Leave a comment on paragraph 10 0 Some social annotation tools provide an option for private note-taking. This feature can be a useful provocation to explore the countervailing values of openness and privacy in the classroom, on the Web, and in democracy generally. It can also help students learn to read more deliberately, attentively, even caressingly, not only marking and defining unfamiliar words, concepts, or references, not only positing interpretations, but also registering their sensory experience of a text, exchanging a hermeneutic approach for the erotic one memorably advocated by the critic Susan Sontag.

11 Leave a comment on paragraph 11 0 Although the terms social reading and social annotation point to a genuinely new affordance of digital text, it’s important to note that the affordance isn’t sociality itself but, as noted above, the speed and scale at which it can be practiced. Failure to register this fact obscures one of the most important opportunities that the Web offers us as teachers: to explore with our students how thoroughly social the activities of reading and writing have always been. The deeply social nature of annotation in particular was a theme of a symposium held in 1988, five years before the advent of the graphical Web, entitled "Annotation and Its Texts," at which the historian Anthony Grafton delivered an "informal report" on a pathbreaking investigation with his colleague Lisa Jardine into Renaissance reading practices. Setting out to discover how the English writer Gabriel Harvey read his copy of Livy’s Roman history, Grafton and Jardine discovered that the answer was publicly, rhetorically, even collaboratively, not so much for private meditation as for worldly action. It would have surprised but perhaps not displeased Harvey that a world-wide audience can now page through his annotations of Livy themselves at Annotated Books Online, where they can also engage in a kind of second-order social annotation: lovingly transcribing his notes and those of other margin-scribblers in a growing library of annotated early modern books.

12 Leave a comment on paragraph 12 0 The artifacts collected here are intended to illustrate social annotation’s wide range of possible uses for teaching literature, writing, and the history of books and reading, as well as the variety of the tools themselves.


Annotation Assignment



15 Leave a comment on paragraph 15 0 Jonathan Burton’s assignment uses social annotation to sharpen students’ close reading skills and to teach collaboration. Working in teams, students select passages from the assigned reading that they consider "rich in figurative language, curious in form or otherwise abundant in detail," transcribe them in Google docs, and annotate them. In a second round, they respond to some of their classmates’ annotations. Finally, students draw on their annotated transcriptions to produce brief "problem papers." This assignment takes advantage of a simple digital tool with a very shallow learning curve to move students past the "solitary-reader-meets-text" model of textual analysis and scaffold their development of a more comprehensive argument. It can be easily adapted to any text.

Annotating The Elements of Style



18 Leave a comment on paragraph 18 0 Using PBWorks, a group of Laura Lisabeth’s students produced this artifact for a class she describes in her article "Empowering Education with Social Annotation and Wikis," published in Web Writing: Why and How for Liberal Arts Teaching and Learning, ed. Jack Dougherty and Tennyson O’Donnell (University of Michigan Press/Trinity College ePress edition, 2014), http://epress.trincoll.edu/webwriting/chapter/lisabeth. This anthology of essays on digital writing pedagogy was itself assembled through an open peer-review process. (The CommentPress version of Lisabeth’s essay may be found here. Lisabeth asked students to respond to Strunk and White’s Elements of Style — a freighted cultural object — encouraging them to comment not only discursively but also in ways that make use of links (literal or figurative) to other objects. This emphasis on objects deliberately pulls against the conventional notion of social annotation as conversation.

Commentary and Anthology as Genres



21 Leave a comment on paragraph 21 0 Like many of the other artifacts collected here, Alan Jacobs’ assignment is designed to encourage close reading. But Jacobs’ eloquent explanation of the assignment also invites students to consider both their reading and their writing historically. Pointing out that commentary is a genre, he questions the cultural assumption that it is "passive" in comparison to the genre most students are asked to master in college: the argumentative essay. Jacobs has students compile an anthology of writings in CommentPress, a plugin for the WordPress blogging platform, then comment on these writings collaboratively. As he points out, the anthology, too, is a genre, and together the two genres of genre and anthology represent major traditions of religious reading.

Image Annotation Assignment



24 Leave a comment on paragraph 24 0 Trish Baer’s annotation assignment for a course on "Old Norse Gods and Heroes" was developed as part of a course on Digital Pedagogy taught at DHSI, the Digital Humanities Summer Institute, by Katherine D. Harris, Diane Jakacki, and Jentery Sayers. It illustrates the value of social annotation for teaching students to read images as well as text. Baer’s assignment has students use A.nnotate, a platform that permits users to select image regions for annotation. She asks students to think of an unfamiliar image from Norse mythology "as a mystery in need of a solution that you will acquire the skills to solve." Solving the mystery involves recognizing some of the features that set images apart from written texts, such as the use of visual icons and the placement of figures in spacial relationships that generate meaning.

Video Annotation Assignment



27 Leave a comment on paragraph 27 0 Jennifer Proctor’s video annotation assignment uses an open-source platform for which the creator, Mozilla, has chosen to discontinue support: PopcornMaker. It thus illustrates one of the risks of social annotation and of digital pedagogy in general. However, it’s included here not for the choice of platform but for the shape of the assignment and the fact that the annotated object is a moving image. Proctor’s assignment establishes a very particular framework for the student’s annotations, asking students to consider, for example, how reality is mediated and processed in the clip they are to annotate. Any platform that supports video annotation, such as SocialBook, could work for this assignment; another option would be to use open-source video annotation software such as that being developed by the Open Video Annotation Project.

Sample of Student Conversation



30 Leave a comment on paragraph 30 0 This screenshot of an upper-level British literature survey class is included in Bob Stein’s blogpost "SocialBook in Action", which illustrates the range and power of SocialBook as a collaborative annotation platform. Readers can establish social identities with avatars and belong to multiple groups. They can engage in rich, detailed interpretive discussion in the margins of a text, and they can connect these discussions to their broader social presence online — for example, by "liking" a marginal comment on Facebook. As Stein points out in his blogpost, the "emerging class of applications" to which SocialBook and other platforms collected here belong might be called ‘[collaborative] thinking processors’ as opposed to reading environments or word processors. The stronger the social ties in a platform for collaborative annotation, the greater the likelihood that a class moves from conversation to a genuine sense of community.

Instructor Comment in The Readers’ Thoreau



33 Leave a comment on paragraph 33 0 I’ve included my own comment in the margin of Henry David Thoreau’s Walden here to illustrate how an instructor’s annotation can serve to make connections between a text under discussion and other texts in a variety of media. An instructor’s comment can also prompt students to consider a particular passage in the larger context of the work or in the context of ideas. This social edition of Walden can be found at The Readers’ Thoreau, a site that embeds a library of Henry David Thoreau’s works in a social network built with Commons In A Box and CommentPress. Kristen Case (University of Maine, Farmington) and I describe how the network operates and our experience teaching with it in "Reading Deliberately: Thoreau Online". Like SocialBook, The Readers’ Thoreau attempts to build a sense of community among readers by extending their connections beyond the margins of the text.

Annotation Lesson Plan



36 Leave a comment on paragraph 36 0 Rachel Arteaga’s lesson plan for annotating a portion of Moby-Dick using MIT’s Annotation Studio not only encourages close reading and collaboration but also illustrates the variety of textual features that can be brought to students’ attention through annotation. It also encourages students to think about those features taxonomically by taking advantage of Annotation Studio’s ability to accept comment tags. Arteaga divides her students into 5 groups focused on annotating, respectively, vocabulary, cultural/literary/geographical references, claims, tone/language/syntax, and social contexts.

Guidelines for Annotating Fiction



39 Leave a comment on paragraph 39 0 Meera Nair’s "Annotation Exercises for Fiction Boot Camp" has been included here for its attempt to define what an "excellent fiction annotation" should contain, as well as for its use of Genius as annotation platform. Most of the social annotation assignments collected here ask students to generate interpretive or explanatory annotations; Nair’s does the same, but it also asks them to comment on passages with an eye toward craft, focusing, for example, on characterization, scenic presentation, and thematic development. Genius is a platform that many students will already be familiar with, and it’s one where they can join a larger community of readers interested in annotating literature (particularly song lyrics) collaboratively. Nair has written about her use of social annotation to teach fiction for the National Writing Project.

Teacher Resource Guide



42 Leave a comment on paragraph 42 2 Unlike the other annotation tools represented here, Hypothes.is doesn’t work by importing content into an annotation platform; instead, it superimposes annotation functionality on Web content wherever you find it. It can even be used to annotate pdfs on the Web. This Teacher Resource Guide on the Hypothes.is website explains how to install the Chrome extension and the bookmarklet for other browsers, walks users through the basics of creating an annotation, and provides several examples of assignments, including an assignment to annotate a scholarly article. In one of the resources, "10 Ways to Annotate with Students", Jeremy Dean, Director of Education for Hypothes.is, points out the value of asking students to explore different users’ annotation streams, apart from the texts to which the annotations are attached; this approach foregrounds social connections rather than texts.

43 Leave a comment on paragraph 43 0 Hypothes.is YouTube Channel. Web. 17 September 2015. https://www.youtube.com/user/hypths

44 Leave a comment on paragraph 44 0 Annotations at Harvard. Harvard University. Web. 17 September 2015. http://www.annotations.harvard.edu/icb/icb.do?keyword=k80243&pageid=icb.page422517

45 Leave a comment on paragraph 45 0 MIT Annotation Studio YouTube Channel. Web. 17 September 2015. https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC701jx4rVA2eQSqjJ-ylf_g

46 Leave a comment on paragraph 46 0 Candide 2.0. New York Public Library. Web. 17 September 2015. http://candide.nypl.org/text/

47 Leave a comment on paragraph 47 0 Stein, Bob. A Taxonomy of Social Reading. Institute for the Future of the Book. Web. 17 September 2015. http://futureofthebook.org/social-reading/


48 Leave a comment on paragraph 48 0 A.nnotate. Web. 17 September 2015. http://a.nnotate.com/

49 Leave a comment on paragraph 49 0 Annotated Books Online. Web. 17 September 2015. http://www.annotatedbooksonline.com/

50 Leave a comment on paragraph 50 0 Commons In A Box. Web. 17 September 2015. http://commonsinabox.org

51 Leave a comment on paragraph 51 0 Dean, Jeremy. "Back to School with Annotation: 10 Ways to Annotate with Students." Blog post. 25 August 2015. Web. 17 September 2015. https://hypothes.is/blog/back-to-school-with-annotation-10-ways-to-annotate-with-students/

52 Leave a comment on paragraph 52 0 Duncombe. Stephen. Open Utopia. Web. 17 September 2015. http://theopenutopia.org/

53 Leave a comment on paragraph 53 0 Fitzpatrick, Kathleen. Planned Obsolescence. Web. 17 September 2015. http://mcpress.media-commons.org/plannedobsolescence/

54 Leave a comment on paragraph 54 0 Genius. Web. 17 September 2015. http://genius.com

55 Leave a comment on paragraph 55 0 Graff, Gerald and Cathy Birkenstein. "They Say/I Say": The Moves that Matter in Academic Writing. 3rd ed. New York: W.W. Norton and Co., 2015.

56 Leave a comment on paragraph 56 0 Grafton, Anthony and Lisa Jardine. "’Studied for Action’: How Gabriel Harvey Read His Livy." Past & Present 129 (1990): 30-78. Print.

57 Leave a comment on paragraph 57 0 Grafton, Anthony. "Discitur ut agatur: How Gabriel Harvey Read His Livy." Annotation and Its Texts. Ed. Stephen A. Barney. New York: Oxford University Press, 1991. 108-129.

58 Leave a comment on paragraph 58 0 HASTAC Scholars Program. "’Amplified Marginalia’: Social Reading, Listening, and Writing." Blog post. 9 May 2013. Web. 17 September 2015. https://www.hastac.org/initiatives/hastac-scholars/scholars-forums/amplified-marginalia-social-reading-listening-and

59 Leave a comment on paragraph 59 0 Harris, Katherine D., Diane Jakacki, and Jentery Sayers. Digital Pedagogy. Web. 17 September 2015. http://web.uvic.ca/~englblog/pedagogydhsi/

60 Leave a comment on paragraph 60 0 Lisabeth, Laura. "Empowering Education with Social Annotation and Wikis." Web Writing: Why and How for Liberal Arts Teaching and Learning. Ed. Jack Dougherty and Tennyson O’Donnell (University of Michigan Press/Trinity College ePress edition, 2014), http://epress.trincoll.edu/webwriting/chapter/lisabeth

61 Leave a comment on paragraph 61 0 Nair, Meera. "Annotate the Plot: Using Annotation to Write Better Fiction." Digital Is. National Writing Project. Web. 17 September 2015. http://digitalis.nwp.org/resource/6179

62 Leave a comment on paragraph 62 0 Open Video Annotation Project. Web. 17 September 2015. http://www.openvideoannotation.org/

63 Leave a comment on paragraph 63 0 The Readers’ Thoreau. Web. 17 September 2015. http://commons.digitalthoreau.org

64 Leave a comment on paragraph 64 0 Schacht, Paul and Kristen Case. "Reading Deliberately: Thoreau Online."

65 Leave a comment on paragraph 65 0 SocialBook. Web. 17 September 2015. http://www.livemargin.com Pedagogy 15 (2015): 193-206.

66 Leave a comment on paragraph 66 0 Sontag, Susan. Against Interpretation and Other Essays. New York: Dell Publishing Co., 1978.

67 Leave a comment on paragraph 67 0 Stein, Bob. "Social Book in Action." Blog post. 18 August 2013. Web. 17 September 2015. http://futureofthebook.org/blog/2013/08/18/socialbook-in-action/

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